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raheema - below this are the questions we need to think about in planning our narrative. I HAVE WRITTEN IN MY THOUGHTS ABOUT each. can you please edit this or let me know what you think. Hi George, What do you want this story to be about? Do you want me to make up characters or have actual family member? Do you weant this story to be true or made up? I wont be able to access the internet until Sat due to eid and since im in Pakistan i have to celebrate it. I might be able to access the internet on Friday but i have asked miss if we can have a little bit more time.we have until Monday By Raheema we soould do were you are because you are in Pakistan from george georges

I have answered some questions these are only suggestions you can change them if you like Raheema

raheema me and george s are going to start to make movie maker. put the story on this page our team page so me and george s can do movie maker tell me asap so me and george s can do the work from george georges

George, Can you or George S upload ur story so i know whats happening i cant get internet much cause im moving round but im trying to get internet anyway please upload your stories and i will try to write one or i can just edit.

thanks, raheema
 * who will the protagonist (main character) be? raheema l think you should do the story because you are in Pakistan.
 * who is in his/her family?Ok them there is me, mum-uzma, and the cousin-Alisha, cousin-Rehan the cousins can also be brothers and sisters.
 * what is his/her normal family/daily life like? normal daily life go to school, go to school come back to school and daily activities
 * what causes his/her family life to be disrupted/forces family to flee and become refugees?wars,bomb blast, deadly causes
 * how do they leave their home country - legally/illegally? Boat? Plane? Walking? i think illegally would be a more interesting story
 * what happens on the way to their new country?a much better life
 * how do they feel?happy to be safe and sad to leave their family
 * what is their new life like?safe
 * what makes it easy/hard to adjust to their new home?i think it would be hard to settle into a new life style
 * what does he/she think the future will be like? a better life

Other aspects to consider in planning:


 * what form do you want your presentation to take? Why? george s-movie maker
 * will you use music? if so, which music? where will you source it from legally? george g slow music,sad some happy,freedom
 * what factual information do you need? who will get it? from where? Make sure you get bibliographic details. george s.
 * what photos/pictures/video will you add to your presentation? Where will this come from legally? Make sure you get bibliographic details for all images/videos. george g we need a famliy together,a boat,water,paskasion,movie maker
 * who is responsible for what in your group? george g becaus

The completed, detailed PLAN is due by 8pm Wednesday - you will have heaps of class time later to learn new skills related to preparing the presentation. Completed projects are due at the end of Week 8. Presentations will be in Week 9.

Challenge 1 Today we learnt how to use wikispaces. Using wiki spaces for the first time was was interesting because we got to look and using all of the different programs. Working as a team interesting because we had different ideas. HI Raheema - photos and adjectives are brilliant - but now you need to take these phrases and work them into full structured text type - introduction, body, conclusion, variety fo sentences, structured paragraph...:-) By Raheema On wikispaces l learn to discover how to send message, to save my work. by george georges

**__ Pakistani refugees- flash floods __**


 * These victims suffered from a flood. These victims come from Pakistan. These victims left there country. They had nothing left. They left there family and friends. **


 * These people are depressed, they have lost everything. These refugees did nothing wrong they were innocent. Once the floods were over they were irritated and mot of them were homeless. These victims were speechless and worried; everyone was affected in at least one way. Parents were concerned what would happen to there kids but they stayed tough and got through it. There lives were ruined, they were miserable and sad. There condition was horrible; they were desperate for homes and powerless of what they got. Most people were weak, dirty and cold. **


 * All I could imagine was how I would be surviving. The dirty conditions I would be living in if that happened to me. The amount of noise from everyone panicking. I would think of the dirty smell around me from all the water. **


 * I think that the victims would be miserable and depressed. They would feel lonely and scared. They would be concerned bout there family and friends. They would be speechless and powerless. **


 * I sometimes wonder how people can get through times like that. **

** By Raheema **

==** These refugees did nothing wrong they were innocent. Parents were concerned what would happen to there kids but they stayed tough and got through it. There lives were ruined, they were miserable and sad. Most people were weak, dirty and cold. **** All I could imagine was how I would be surviving. The dirty conditions I would be living in if that happened to me. The amount of noise from everyone panicking. I would think of the dirty smell around me from all the water. by GEORGE SALAMA **==



What are the living conditions like in their home country? Some people live bad with drink dirty water have no homes and sleep outdoors but some people have homes and have beds to sleep on.

Why would they feel a need to leave? People feel the need to leave because it is very dangerous and and is at the state where you cant live there anymore

What opportunities are their in their home country to make a better life for themselves there? Need to find work and try to stay safe

What do they have to do to get to another country safely? Legally? Fill out an immigration form

Is the trip to another country safe? Yes

How do they feel? Sad because they have to leave there home country and friends and family By Raheema Malik

What are the living conditions like in their home country? The living conditions are like in Pakistan is very bad, there’s water is dirty ,there home’s are wreck, they have no food to live and it hard to make money.

Why would they feel a need to leave? They would feel to live leave because they wont to protect there family from what there through ,and there have no food,money,cothes and need clean water.

What opportunities are their in their home country to make a better life for themselves there? For them to make a better place there need to find work, work as a community to live better.

How do they feel? There must of feel sad,loney ,have nothing to do and there also must feat stress.

GEORGE GEORGES