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Force United - We are Lamia, Sunny & Mariedene & we are united as 1! =]

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Today i learnt that when you work with different people you can achieve great things. Not everyone is the same and you got to work alongside them to see how things are done. - Mariedene

Today I learnt, that if you work well and co-operate with your group well, you will achieve many things and you can also see the style that you and your group work. This is what you will achieve. - Sony :) 

Today i learnt that we could axhieve anything even though we are not working with people we usually choose to work with. All we need to do is work together as a force united and we can acomplish whatever we want to.=) !!!*** 

Today i learnt that that Haiti is really troubled & need help. - Mazza Maridene - True, but reflections must be short paragraphs, not one brief sentence! Description on Haiti - good use of adjectives and strong verbs - needs a little bit of editing - a few minor errors in punctuation. Good use of variety of sentences, and structure is sound as well. B Research and answers to questions - very good!!! A

Lamia - glad to see your work over the weekend - and good to know you get it now! Your description on Pakistan is very strong - SSTs A, sentences B, paragraphs, A and overall description B. Your answers to questions are very sound - good information and responses - A

Sunny - your responses are quite brief - you text "Why people move to other countries" doesn't provide any specific detail and is not written in complete sentences. Your description text is only one short paragraph and again doesn't display your ability to write structured paragraphs within a text - if you'd like to have another go, use the scaffold to plan your text, re-write it with more specific detail, and then upload the new one with "revised" in the title. C for SSTs, and Ds for sentences, paragraphs and Description text as it is. D as well for responses to questions. I think you can do better!

Last week I learnt that the Philippines is a country in need of help. Tourists that come to the Philippines come because they want see the lovely beaches and the hot weather, however not all places in the Philippines are fantastic. Some parts of the Philippines need help because of the poor living conditions

LAST WEEK I LEARNT THAT THERE ARE A FEW COUNTRIES THAT ARE NOT AT PEACE AND ONE OF THEM IS LEBANON. LEBANON IS AT WAR WITH ISRAEL, ISRAEL IS ACROSS THE BORDER OF LEBANON. THE POLITICIANS IN LEBANON DEBATE/ARGUE AND THE SOLDIER BLEW UP THE BORDER BETWEEN LEBANON AND ISRAEL. MANY PEOPLE FLEE TO PLACES LIKE GREECE TO BE AWAY FROM THE WAR AND SO THAT THEY CAN BE SAFE. LAMIA=)**